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where poetry hides

Author: 
richbooy

Poetry hides in the happiness that a new baby brings. Poetry hides in the eyes of the baby cat as well.      Maybe the happiness will come out...

Comments

Rich, It's interesting how

Rich,

It's interesting how you compare a new baby to a baby cat. I wonder - Why do babies bring happiness?

The last line makes me think about how each person can become different things, and you don't know how they will turn out until they grow. It's almost a sad line. I like it.

Keep writing!

-Mr. Mackert

Dear Richboy, I like this

Dear Richboy, I like this poem because it is both interesting and sweet. I keep thinking about the last line and hope that the happiness does come out. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what is hidden in your next poem! Ms.R...
JT