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Poetry in the mind of the writer

March 26, 2008 - 9:43am — eduar
Author: 
eduar

Poetry hides in the moves I use when I'm boxing.

Poetry hides in the T.V. and secret scream.

Poetry hides in the death of the American soldiers.

Poetry hides in me.

Comments

March 26, 2008 - 11:21am — nmackert

Eduar, As I said in class, I

Eduar,

As I said in class, I think there is an interesting theme in your lines. They all seem to be about fighting or struggling. It's interesting, because most people write that poetry hides in "beautiful" things like rain or babies. But you find something to appreciate in the harsh side of life. It really makes me think.

Keep on writing-I want to see more!

-Mr. Mackert

 

March 31, 2008 - 9:31am — eduar

thanks

thanks
April 6, 2008 - 12:40pm — mranfone

Eduar, this is a very

Eduar, this is a very interesting poem. All your lines work well together. I like the line "Poetry hides in the moves I use when I am boxing." It's a deep and thought provoking poem. fantastic job
April 7, 2008 - 9:33pm — salex218

Oh Eduar - This is Ms. S.

Oh Eduar - This is Ms. S. ALexander

 

I really like your poem. Very thought provoking. Who knew you could go so deep?! 
JT