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I am

Author: 
youngchris170

 i am like my favorite kicks because of the bright colors and i like to shine.

i am like my hood because i am full of character.

i am like a lion because i am the king of my bedroom.

i am like a sunny day because sometimes i am happy.



BY:chris p
3/26/08

Comments

"I am like a lion because i

"I am like a lion because i am the king of my bedroom" that is a great line.

I'd love to hear more about your hood. What kind of characters do you find there?

Keep up the writing, Chris.

-Mr. Mackert

Dear Chris, you did a very

Dear Chris, you did a very good job capturing your unique essence. This is colorful and very you. The whole poem works so well, keep up the fantastic work!
JT