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Four doors of poetry

Author: 
johortiz6

Poetry hides behind the     sadness I feel when someone gets hurt.

 

Poetry hides behind the sun and me.

 

Poetry hides behind my books and cartoons.

 

Poetry hides behind girls and what they are thinking about me.

                      

                        By J.P. 

Comments

Dear J.P.The last line is my

Dear J.P.

The last line is my favorite. And I have to ask . . . how do you know what the girls are thinking?

By the way - nice presentation. The blue font and the organization of the lines works well for the poem.

-Mr. Mackert

J.P....I really like this

J.P....I really like this poem. It's quiet and thoughtful and flows nicely. You're such a poet! Keep up the good work. Ms.R
JT