On My Way To Bangladesh
January 14, 2008 - 12:29pm — Ahmed
It all started on March14, 2007. My family and I went out of the house and into the car. We said all of our goodbyes to our family members and friends. Finally, my dad started to drive we were on our way to the airport. It tooks like an hour or two but it felt like forever. By the time we got into the plane, it took off and we came back to America. My sister was asking me are we there yet.
After 24 hours the plane landed and we saw my uncle outside waiting for us. Finally we got into a cab and drove to my dad’s house. After a few days I was still a little tired. One afternoon I got a phone call saying my grandfather was sick. So my family and I went on a boat ride to see him. We went to see him for 3 days until my uncle took me everywhere I wanted to go.
Well I was better and when we left there was nothing much to do there. During the time we stayed in Bangladesh I had the time of my life. I was there with my uncle he bought me a few movies. Every day I always had ice cream and soda. Finally the time came for us to go back home I was so sad that I didn't want to leave. Then my dad told me we would come back soon.
Comments
1. Your story is good but it
1. Your story is good but it doesn't make sense in some parts.
2. Check your spelling
3. Good story!