"Animals are living things too"

May 1, 2012 - 9:50am — lcrespo691
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lcrespo691
Liz Crespo 602
ELA 3\26\2012- 4\ 20\2012
Ms. Mandel
“ Animals are living things too”
I’m doing research for my class, and i’m trying to get people to see my Point Of View. One day My, wish was the day that i started, I went to my classrooms and asked students,and teachers if they thought if they agreed on my statement. What am I talking about? You’ll see...

I have researched onhttp://writingeditorials.weebly.com/pet-ownership.html that leades me to, aacap.org\cs\root\facts_for_families\pets_andchildren. Careind about your family and friends you need to take care of your pets. Before you buy a pet think about your family and how you are going to take care of it, before your family gets sick just by not being a good pet owner. We don’t think about those things and we pay for the consequences. Parents need to be more responsible, with childs and pets.

This is like : child abuse, and pet abuse. I really want people to understand my statement especially parents. Abuse isn’t “ Cool “ or right ; you, everybody including myself need to analyze what are we doing if you don't want problems. Anyways, One of the comments that a student made was an example, she said : “ I agree, because : Well the parent or parents can be drunk and not know what’s going on plus the child can pull cat’s tail and cat react to that cause.” I want people, you out there to Analyze and Recognize that POV like that student or school partner does.

I really love children and pets and a know that you do to; So help everybody and “ If you see something say something” Freeze: and make a change. As i said this is practically well not really it is pet abuse and children abuse. You need to Freeze: certain people that you see , know or whoever that does that.
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Comments

May 1, 2012 - 9:55am — wrivas609

I Think You should stay on

I Think You should stay on toppic and use a little bit morew details it was a nice story but i think you should stay on topic :/ :)
May 1, 2012 - 9:56am — lbland093

stay on topic and your essay

stay on topic and your essay could be a lot better but it was okay
May 1, 2012 - 9:57am — nmedina539

I dont get the last sentence

I dont get the last sentence maybe you should make more sense of itand include more details, "Point Of View"... It doesnt have to be upper cased...

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May 1, 2012 - 10:13am — DFelix137

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