October 12, 2011 - 10:42am — nfrazier332
It was a normal Friday morning.There was no school so I enjoyed it.It was September 23 2008.That day we had to go get chips,cake,and the party supplies for my sleepover.The next day I leapt to my feet.I was so Full of joy because that day was my sleepover.When I went in the living-room my godmother,and godfather was putting up the decorations,setting up the tables and putting ,my beads in glass bowls,and the food(hot dogs,chips,and hamburgers etc.).
Hours past and I already had my nails and hair and I had on my outfit.My outfit was my favorite color which is blue,it had sparkles and i had on a birthday crown.When it was like 5:00 pm my friends and family came to my house to the celebrate the occasion.The people that was there was Bryanna,Sade,Chenya(shan-i-ya),Gaylenis,Kareema,Dakota,Kayla,Chianti ,Amber and my sister Nia.The first thing we did was go in the hallway and made a pyramid.We always fell no matter how much times we did it.
Next,my mom laid out beads and string.We was going to make necklaces,bracelets,and earrings.It was stupendous.Soon we had pizza from Little Ceasers.It was scrumptious!After we sung happy birthday(even though my birthday is September 25).My birthday cake was beautiful because it had a picture of me and the theme was High School Musical.We all took a shower one by one.
It was crazy because everyone got stuck in my room except me,my mom,and Sade.Chianti was screaming because she thought she would have to live in there forever.Soon my godfather took off the door knob and the door opened all by its self.Every body ran out.After everyone took their shower we started to go in the living room and put our sleeping bags on the floor and my mom blew up a air mattress for some of the girls to sleep in.We started to watch High School Musical,then we were going to watch High School Musical 2.When we were in the middle of the movie some people started to fall asleep because they were tired of all the fun we had that day.When the movie was done I called my mom.Only Bryanna,Kareema,Sade,Amber,and Dakota was up.My mom came in the living room at 12:00 in the morning to change the movie disc.
Soon every one fell asleep even me.It was 4:00 in the morning but it was really really dark I felt terrified because I thought it was a eclipsed so I turned around facing the window and I saw a Blue Balloon.It looked like a ghost and I was frightened but I said to my self don't worry because I am finally 9 years old.All I smelled was my leftovers from my birthday cake and all I felt was the heat around me also my sleeping bag was wrapped around me.Soon I went back to sleep.
When it was around 12:00 in the afternoon we begin to eat our breakfast.We had eggs,bacon,pancakes.waffles,corn beef hash,and ham.I felt I was in a all star restaurant.Soon everybody took a shower and got dress.Everybody started to leave at 7:30.When everybody left I felt lonely.
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Nyiah I loved your story
Nyiah I loved your story about your famous sleepover