My WorSt DaY

Author: 
Jonathan

         One day I was playing soccer with my friends and cousins on the block where I live. Their names are Christian, William, David and my three best friends Ivan, Anthony, and Alex. I was playing very well and  my friends and I said that we should play again tomorrow,  I had agreed.

     I went to sleep and I had a bad dream, I dreamed that I was going to get hurt, I didn’t pay attention. The next day I started to play and then my cousin Christian told me don’t run  I didn’t listen to him. I began to run and it all happened so slowly.  I slipped on the glass. I think I flew like 2 inches on the air I hit the floor. I heard the glass crack I couldn’t move I fell asleep for 3 minutes. Then all I could remember was my friends and cousins looking at me.

    I felt my knee was really hot.  I saw it and I screamed. My foot looked like a rotten egg that has been out on the street. I got up I was very dizzy then I went to sit down on the stair way. I went home my mom took a look at me and then when I woke up I was in the hospital the doctor said I was going to be alright he said  that I just thought it was going to be broken but its alright. 1 week later I was back playing soccer. I learned my lesson never play near broken glass because you can have bad luck just like me. The doctor said I don’t have to stay away from playing  soccer.

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Comments

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very nice work

 

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liked it and even though it sounds painfull it is hallarious!!!

Very very nice.

Very very nice.

i feel bad

i feel bad

Nice story

Nice story