The Savannah

November 15, 2007 - 3:35pm — Briana
Author: 
Briana
I  was  sitting in the expedition cart then all of a sudden the Giraffe  came and licked me right on my cheek &I attended a sound of shrieking  Monkeys & the roar of the lions far away ,The sound of the giraffes crunching the leaves(eating them).Then I said…Ewwwwwww! & we had to drive off rapidly because the lions were racing ahead. Then when I was on my way home I realized that you shouldn’t judge a place by what you hear.” before Judgment”. Then when I went home I told everyone about the best trip I had to the Savannah in Florida. The best part about going home & telling everyone is because I get to say an exciting story about what happened in the Savannah.
Average: 3.2 (5 votes)

Comments

November 15, 2007 - 3:48pm — Andrey

a monkey  ????

a monkey  ????
November 19, 2007 - 11:10am — AXGiggles

Very good explanation of 

Very good explanation of  your memorable moment.  The language is  good and descriptive.  You need to add a clear introduction explaining where you are, why you're there, and who you're with.
December 6, 2007 - 3:12pm — Nakeysha

wow great story briana!

wow great story briana!
December 6, 2007 - 3:15pm — Casandra

wo0ow nice story u used gud

wo0ow nice story u used gud words nd monkeys lolz
December 6, 2007 - 3:15pm — Casandra

wo0ow nice story u used gud

wo0ow nice story u used gud words nd monkeys lolz
December 6, 2007 - 3:33pm — Nakeysha

fab-u-losss!i would give you

fab-u-losss!i would give you 6,00000 thumbs up! good job!

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December 6, 2007 - 3:36pm — Yesenia

COOL STORY

COOL STORY
December 6, 2007 - 3:39pm — Deniza

wow a monkey ha ha ha ha ha

wow a monkey ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 7, 2007 - 10:34am — Jasmine

WAT UP BOO YOUR STORY IS

WAT UP BOO YOUR STORY IS BAGIN