Graduation
November 13, 2008 - 12:18pm — kthang
The snapshot I’m writing about is when the students were singing the song on our graduation day. The song was “Whenever You Remember” by Carrie Underwood. We were singing in the auditorium. I was there because it was my ceremony and I was excited. It was in the morning and the season was summer. My mom, my cousin, and my two aunts were there. Around me, there are people singing and the adults were listening and taking pictures. In front of me, my family were looking and listening to the song that we were singing. I see my friends, teachers, adults, my family, and the students are wearing green gowns. I was holding my awards when I was singing the song. That was my best day and I won’t forget it.
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you had a cool graduation
you had a cool graduation
HEY KIM YOUR GRADUATION
HEY KIM YOUR GRADUATION SOUNDED LIKE A LOT OF FUN I WISH I WAS THERE
WITH YOU. I HAVE A QUESTION FOR YOU DID YOU START TO GET A LITTLE UPSET THAT YOU WERE LEAVING ANY FRIENDS AND TEACHERS OR DID YOU FEEL OK
Kim- Great job with your
Kim- Great job with your snapshot. I really felt the mood at that moment while you guys were singing. You did an awesome job recreating that moment.
good job describing alot of
good job describing alot of details and using alot descriptive languge good job