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First Dog

April 2, 2008 - 9:16am — richbooy
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When I Richard was a child i remember when I got my first dog. The dog's name was Lady. She was black and brown. I wonder how she's doing? I remember her bark; it sounded like she was always pouting. I miss her because she used to chase us and play alot. She was never bored or lazy.



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April 2, 2008 - 10:49am — mranfone

Dear Richard, I absolutely

Dear Richard,

I absolutely love the line: "I remember her bark; it sounded like she was always pouting." It makes me want to write about my own dogs. How did they bark? You have inspired me.

-Mr. Mackert

April 6, 2008 - 8:56pm — mranfone

Dear Richard, you seem to

Dear Richard, you seem to have a curiosity in animals and they seem to mean a lot to you. I like this poem! Lady sounded like a special dog.
JT