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Pool Club

Author: 
johortiz6

When my dad had a pool club in D. R.

The light during the time was blue and red

The color of the Dominican Flag.

There were three green tables and one red.

Only my dad could play on the red one.

The music was Spanish.

My dad was there, my dad’s friends. One was a policeman. 

Comments

JP, This poem helps me see

JP,

This poem helps me see your life in a new way. My favorite line is: "Only my dad could play on the red one." That is a great detail.

Keep writing, JP!

-Mr. Mackert

J.P....I like this poem a

J.P....I like this poem a lot! I like the line about the light and I get a view of your days in the D.R. Good job.
JT